Frizzle Dizzle Frickity Frack, What Does This Poem Lack?

Tip-toe through the jello
of my mind. Avoid touching
the walls. They jiggle.

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Fragment of Pottery

Early barbaric period, guaranteed;
ambitiously attempted; however,
pigmentation pattern indicates autonomy
of a juvenile; indeed suggests local exploration
and philistine predisposition. Psychologists
predict imminent development. Archaeologists
request a sweet and an opportunity for respite.